Prose
The study of prose fiction at A-Level demands close attention to narrative technique, the construction of character and setting, and the ways in which novels engage with literary traditions and historical contexts. Prose is the most capacious of literary forms, capable of encompassing the intimate detail of consciousness and the broad sweep of social history. This section provides a systematic reference for the terminology, concepts, and analytical frameworks you will need.
Prose Terminology
Narrative Voice and Point of View
The narrative voice is the consciousness through which a story is told. It is distinct from the author and may be located at varying degrees of distance from the characters and events described. The choice of narrative voice fundamentally shapes the reader's experience and understanding of the text.
First-person narration uses "I" and presents the story through the perspective of a character within the narrative. The first-person narrator may be a protagonist (narrating their own story) or a witness (observing and reporting the story of others). Key considerations when analysing first-person narration include:
- Reliability: Is the narrator trustworthy? First-person narrators are inherently limited by their knowledge, perspective, and biases. An unreliable narrator -- a narrator whose account the reader has reason to doubt -- is a powerful device. Nick Carraway in Fitzgerald's The Great Gatsby (1925) is a famously complex example: he is simultaneously insider and outsider, participant and observer, and his self-presentation is at times at odds with what the narrative reveals.
- Self-awareness: Does the narrator reflect on the act of narration itself? Metafictional first-person narrators -- like Lockwood in Brontë's Wuthering Heights (1847) or the unnamed narrator in Ishiguro's The Remains of the Day (1989) -- draw attention to the constructedness of narrative.
- Temporal distance: Is the narrator recounting events as they happen (immediate narration) or looking back from a later vantage point (retrospective narration)? Retrospective narration creates opportunities for irony, reflection, and the dramatisation of memory.
Second-person narration uses "you" and directly addresses the reader or a character. It is rare in sustained fiction but can create powerful effects of intimacy or complicity. Italo Calvino's If on a winter's night a traveller (1979) uses second-person narration to implicate the reader in the act of reading itself.
Third-person narration uses "he," "she," or "they" and may be:
- Omniscient: The narrator knows everything about all characters -- their thoughts, feelings, histories, and futures. The omniscient narrator can move freely between characters' consciousnesses and offer authorial commentary. George Eliot's Middlemarch (1871--72) is a paradigmatic example: the narrator's moral intelligence and psychological acuity are central to the novel's meaning.
- Limited (or subjective): The narrative is filtered through the consciousness of a single character, presenting only what that character knows, perceives, and feels. Jane Austen's Emma (1815) is narrated in free indirect discourse closely aligned with Emma's perspective, which allows Austen to ironise Emma's misperceptions while maintaining access to her inner life.
- Free indirect discourse: A technique in which the third-person narrator adopts the voice, perspective, and idiom of a character without explicit attribution. It creates a hybrid voice that is neither fully narrator nor fully character, and it is one of the most important and versatile devices in the novel. Austen is often credited with perfecting free indirect discourse, which she uses to create irony by blending the narrator's authoritative voice with the character's limited perspective.
Stream of consciousness is an extended form of free indirect discourse that attempts to represent the continuous, unfiltered flow of a character's thoughts, perceptions, and associations. Virginia Woolf's Mrs Dalloway (1925) and James Joyce's Ulysses (1922) are landmark examples. Stream of consciousness disrupts conventional narrative temporality, moving fluidly between past, present, and future and between external events and internal responses.
Unreliable Narration
An unreliable narrator is one whose account the reader has reason to doubt. Wayne C. Booth, in The Rhetoric of Fiction (1961), identified unreliability as a central device in the modern novel. Unreliable narrators may be:
- Naïve: Lacking the maturity or understanding to interpret events correctly (Huck Finn in Twain's Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, 1884).
- Mad: Their mental instability distorts their perception and reporting (the unnamed narrator of Poe's "The Tell-Tale Heart," 1843).
- Deceptive: They deliberately mislead the reader (Humbert Humbert in Nabokov's Lolita, 1955).
- Morally compromised: Their values or assumptions are so at odds with the reader's that their perspective becomes suspect (Marlow in Conrad's Heart of Darkness, 1899).
Analysing unreliable narration requires attention to the gap between what the narrator says and what the text, through other cues, implies. The reader must become an active interpreter, constructing meaning from the discrepancies between the narrator's account and the broader narrative reality.
Narrative Structure
Linear Narrative
Linear narrative presents events in chronological order. While it may seem the most straightforward form, linear narrative can be manipulated through pacing, ellipsis, and emphasis to create suspense, irony, or thematic resonance. Austen's novels are broadly linear, but their carefully controlled revelations of information create structures of suspense and dramatic irony.
Non-Linear Narrative
Non-linear narrative disrupts chronological order through:
- Flashback (analepsis): Returning to events that occurred before the narrative present. Emily Brontë's Wuthering Heights is structurally complex, using nested frame narratives (Lockwood -- Nelly Dean -- the characters' own accounts) to create a palimpsest of perspectives.
- Flashforward (prolepsis): Anticipating events that will occur after the narrative present.
- Circular narrative: The story ends where it began, creating a sense of inevitability or cyclical repetition. Mary Shelley's Frankenstein (1818) uses a circular frame: Walton's Arctic expedition frames Victor's narrative, which frames the Creature's narrative, and the novel ends with Walton still at sea, his fate unresolved.
Framed Narrative
A framed narrative embeds one or more stories within another story, using a framing device (a character telling a story, a discovered manuscript, a series of letters). The frame creates layers of mediation: the reader receives the story through multiple narrators, each of whom may be unreliable. Frankenstein, Wuthering Heights, and Conrad's Heart of Darkness all use framed narratives to explore questions of perspective, authority, and the limits of knowledge.
Episodic Narrative
Episodic narrative consists of a series of loosely connected episodes or vignettes rather than a tightly plotted arc. It can mimic the structure of memory, travel, or oral storytelling. Laurence Sterne's Tristram Shandy (1759--67) is a radical experiment in episodic narrative, digressive and self-interrupting to the point where the plot barely advances.
Characterisation
Direct vs. Indirect Characterisation
Direct characterisation occurs when the narrator explicitly tells the reader what a character is like: "He was a selfish man." This is common in omniscient narration and in early novels.
Indirect characterisation reveals character through action, speech, thought, appearance, and the responses of other characters. Modern fiction overwhelmingly prefers indirect characterisation, which demands more active readerly engagement. In Austen's Pride and Prejudice (1813), Mr Darcy's character is revealed not through description but through his behaviour at the Meryton ball, his letter to Elizabeth after the first proposal, and his interventions on behalf of the Bennet family.
Flat vs. Round Characters
E.M. Forster, in Aspects of the Novel (1927), distinguished between flat characters (constructed around a single idea or quality) and round characters (complex, capable of surprising the reader in a convincing way). Flat characters are not necessarily inferior: they can be highly effective as comic types, symbolic figures, or structural devices. Mrs Bennet in Pride and Prejudice is flat -- defined by her obsession with marrying off her daughters -- but her flatness is central to the novel's satirical project. Round characters, by contrast, have the depth and inconsistency of real people: Elizabeth Bennet, Emma Woodhouse, and Dorothea Brooke are paradigmatic round characters.
Static vs. Dynamic Characters
Static characters do not change significantly over the course of the narrative. Dynamic characters undergo meaningful change in response to events. The distinction between static and dynamic is not the same as flat vs. round: a round character may be static, and a flat character may (in a limited way) be dynamic.
Foil Characters
A foil is a character whose qualities contrast with another character's, thereby highlighting particular traits. In Frankenstein, the Creature's eloquence and capacity for suffering foil Victor's inarticulate anguish and moral blindness. In Dracula (1897), Mina Harker's intelligence and resourcefulness foil Lucy Westenra's passivity and vulnerability.
Setting
Temporal Setting
The time in which a narrative is set -- historical period, season, time of day -- shapes its meaning. The temporal setting of Wuthering Heights (the late eighteenth century, on the cusp of industrialisation) frames the novel's conflict between nature and civilisation, passion and social order. The temporal setting of The Great Gatsby (the summer of 1922, the height of the Jazz Age) is integral to its critique of the American Dream.
Spatial Setting
Physical location -- geography, architecture, landscape -- carries symbolic and thematic significance. The opposition between Thrushcross Grange and Wuthering Heights in Brontë's novel is the spatial expression of the novel's central thematic opposition between cultivated gentility and wild passion. In Frankenstein, the Arctic, the Swiss Alps, and the Orkney Islands are not merely backdrops but active elements of the narrative, shaping the characters' experiences and symbolising states of isolation, transcendence, and desolation.
Social Setting
The social world of a novel -- class structures, gender roles, economic conditions, religious institutions -- is essential to understanding character and conflict. Austen's novels are, among other things, anatomies of the marriage market in Regency England, where women's economic survival depends on advantageous marriage. Dickens's novels anatomise the social injustices of Victorian Britain: Hard Times (1854) critiques industrial capitalism and utilitarian education; Bleak House (1853) attacks the iniquities of the Chancery court system.
Psychological Setting
The psychological atmosphere of a narrative -- its mood, tone, and emotional quality -- is often conveyed through setting. The opening of Frankenstein -- Walton's letters from the Arctic, surrounded by "mist and snow" -- establishes an atmosphere of isolation, ambition, and danger that pervades the entire novel.
Themes and Motifs
Identifying Themes
A theme is a central idea or concern that a text explores. Themes are not "messages" or "morals" but rather the conceptual territory a text maps. Frankenstein, for example, explores themes including the ethics of scientific ambition, the nature of monstrosity, the responsibilities of creation, the relationship between creator and created, and the consequences of social exclusion.
Motifs
A motif is a recurring element -- an image, symbol, phrase, or structural pattern -- that acquires significance through repetition. In The Great Gatsby, the green light at the end of Daisy's dock is a motif that accumulates meaning across the novel, coming to symbolise Gatsby's longing, the illusory nature of the American Dream, and the receding past. In Frankenstein, images of light and fire recur as ambiguous symbols of knowledge and destruction.
Analysing Theme Development
When analysing themes, avoid the pitfall of listing them without examining how they are developed through the text's formal and linguistic choices. Consider:
- How does the narrative structure develop the theme? (Is the theme introduced, complicated, and resolved? Or does it remain unresolved?)
- How do characters embody, debate, or resist the theme?
- How does setting reinforce or challenge the theme?
- How does the text's language -- its diction, imagery, symbolism -- create thematic resonance?
Literary Movements
Realism
Realism, emerging in the mid-nineteenth century, is committed to the accurate, detailed representation of everyday experience. Realist fiction attends to the material conditions of life -- social class, economic circumstance, family relationships -- and typically employs omniscient or free indirect narration to create a comprehensive picture of a social world. Key realist novelists include Austen, Eliot, Dickens, Balzac, Flaubert, and Tolstoy.
George Eliot's Middlemarch (1871--72) is the supreme English realist novel: its subtitle, "A Study of Provincial Life," announces its ambition to represent the complex web of social, political, and personal relationships in a provincial town. Eliot's narrator combines psychological penetration with moral authority, creating a vision of human life that is at once particular and universal.
Modernism
Modernism, flourishing between approximately 1890 and 1945, is characterised by formal experimentation, narrative fragmentation, psychological depth, and a self-conscious engagement with the conditions of modernity (industrialisation, urbanisation, mass warfare, the crisis of religious faith). Key modernist novelists include Woolf, Joyce, Faulkner, Kafka, and Proust.
Virginia Woolf's Mrs Dalloway (1925) and To the Lighthouse (1927) use stream of consciousness and free indirect discourse to represent the interiority of consciousness. Woolf's narrative technique dissolves the boundaries between characters' minds, creating a fluid, impressionistic representation of experience. Her essay "Modern Fiction" (1919) -- "Life is not a series of gig lamps symmetrically arranged; life is a luminous halo, a semi-transparent envelope surrounding us from the beginning of consciousness to the end" -- is a manifesto for the modernist novel's departure from realist convention.
Postmodernism
Postmodernism, emerging after the Second World War and flourishing from the 1960s, is characterised by metafiction (self-reflexive fiction about fiction), intertextuality, unreliable narration, playfulness, and the destabilisation of grand narratives (political, historical, philosophical). Key postmodern novelists include Salman Rushdie, John Fowles, Thomas Pynchon, and Jean Rhys.
Jean Rhys's Wide Sargasso Sea (1966) is a postmodern prequel to Jane Eyre that rewrites Brontë's novel from the perspective of Bertha Mason, the "madwoman in the attic." Rhys's novel interrogates the colonial and patriarchal assumptions underlying Brontë's text, demonstrating how postmodern fiction can function as critical commentary on literary tradition.
Gothic Literature
The Gothic is a mode of fiction that exploits the mysterious, the supernatural, and the terrifying. Gothic conventions include:
- Setting: Isolated, decaying, or haunted spaces -- castles, abbeys, ruined landscapes, wild moorland.
- Atmosphere: Darkness, storms, shadows, oppressive weather, a pervasive sense of unease.
- The supernatural: Ghosts, monsters, demons, curses, prophetic dreams.
- The doubled self: Doppelgängers, split identities, the boundary between human and monster.
- Transgression: Forbidden knowledge, sexual transgression, the violation of social or moral boundaries.
- The uncanny (das Unheimliche): Freud's concept (1919) of the familiar rendered strange and disturbing.
Key Gothic texts for A-Level study:
| Text | Author | Date | Key Themes |
|---|---|---|---|
| Frankenstein | Mary Shelley | 1818 | Creation, monstrosity, responsibility, isolation |
| Wuthering Heights | Emily Brontë | 1847 | Passion, revenge, nature vs. civilisation, the supernatural |
| Dracula | Bram Stoker | 1897 | Invasiveness, sexuality, modernity vs. antiquity, fear of the Other |
| The Picture of Dorian Gray | Oscar Wilde | 1890 | Aestheticism, moral corruption, the double, art vs. life |
| Rebecca | Daphne du Maurier | 1938 | Memory, jealousy, the past, female identity |
| The Bloody Chamber | Angela Carter | 1979 | Gender, sexuality, fairy tale subversion, Gothic feminism |
Mary Shelley's Frankenstein (1818) is the foundational text of the Gothic tradition and a central set text across A-Level boards. Written in response to a ghost-story challenge (the famous summer at the Villa Diodati with Byron and Polidori), Frankenstein combines Gothic conventions with Enlightenment concerns about science, progress, and the limits of human knowledge. The novel's epistolary and framed narrative structure creates layers of mediation that implicate the reader in the act of judgement: the reader, like Walton, must decide where sympathy lies -- with Victor or with the Creature. The novel's engagement with the ethics of creation, the consequences of social rejection, and the relationship between beauty and monstrosity makes it endlessly rich for critical analysis.
Magical Realism
Magical realism is a mode of fiction in which magical or supernatural elements are presented as mundane, integrated into the fabric of everyday reality without surprise or explanation. It emerged from Latin American fiction (Borges, García Márquez, Allende) and has been adopted by writers across the world. Toni Morrison's Beloved (1987) -- in which the ghost of a murdered child manifests as a physical presence -- is a paradigmatic example of magical realism deployed to confront the traumatic legacy of slavery.
Naturalism
Naturalism, associated with Émile Zola and, in English, with Thomas Hardy, applies the principles of scientific determinism to fiction. Characters are shaped by heredity and environment; free will is an illusion. Hardy's Tess of the d'Urbervilles (1891) and Jude the Obscure (1895) are Naturalist novels in which the protagonists are crushed by social and cosmic forces beyond their control. Hardy's narrator frequently intervenes to comment on the indifference of the "Immanent Will" -- his term for the blind, amoral force that governs human destiny.
Key Prose Works by Period with Analysis Frameworks
The Nineteenth-Century Novel
The nineteenth century is the great age of the English novel. The following framework applies to the study of nineteenth-century prose:
- Social and historical context: The Industrial Revolution, the expansion of the franchise, the rise of the middle class, the Woman Question, scientific developments (Darwin, geology), and imperial expansion.
- Serial publication: Many nineteenth-century novels were published in serial form (monthly or weekly instalments), which shaped their structure, pacing, and use of cliffhangers. Dickens's novels are paradigmatic serial publications.
- Narrative technique: Omniscient narration, free indirect discourse, and the use of intrusive narrators.
- Character and society: The relationship between individual desire and social constraint is central to nineteenth-century fiction.
The Twentieth-Century Novel
- Modernist experimentation: Stream of consciousness, temporal disruption, multiple perspectives, mythic allusion.
- Postcolonial perspectives: The legacy of empire, cultural hybridity, the politics of language.
- Gender and sexuality: The emergence of feminist and queer fiction.
- Metafiction and self-reflexivity: Fiction that interrogates its own status as representation.
Comparative Prose Analysis Methodology
Establishing the Basis of Comparison
Identify what connects the texts: a shared genre (both Gothic, both realist), a shared theme (ambition, identity, the past), a shared formal feature (framed narrative, unreliable narrator), or a shared historical context (both written during the Industrial Revolution).
Developing a Comparative Argument
Organise your essay around comparative themes rather than texts. For each paragraph, identify a point of comparison or contrast and explore it through both texts:
- How does each text approach the shared concern?
- What formal and linguistic choices shape each text's treatment?
- How do contextual factors explain similarities and differences?
- What is the significance of the comparison -- what does it reveal about the literary tradition or the cultural moment?
Example Comparative Thesis
"While both Shelley's Frankenstein and Stevenson's Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde (1886) explore the Gothic theme of the doubled self, Shelley locates monstrosity in social exclusion and the failure of parental responsibility, whereas Stevenson locates it in the repression of desire. This difference reflects the shift from Romantic individualism to late-Victorian anxieties about the unconscious and the fragility of civilised identity."
Common Pitfalls in Prose Analysis
- Narrative summary: Retelling the plot without analysing how the narrative is constructed. Move from "what happens" to "how it is told."
- Character worship: Describing characters as if they were real people rather than literary constructs. Analyse how characters are constructed through narrative technique.
- Neglecting narrative voice: Failing to attend to the narrator's role in shaping the reader's understanding. The narrator is not a transparent window but a mediating consciousness.
- Context without connection: Mentioning historical context without linking it to specific textual features. Context should illuminate the text, not replace analysis.
- Theme-spotting: Listing themes without examining how they are developed through form, language, and structure.
- Ignoring genre conventions: Failing to consider how the text engages with or subverts the conventions of its genre (Gothic, realist, modernist).
- Under-analysing setting: Treating setting as mere backdrop rather than as an active element of the narrative that carries thematic and symbolic significance.